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Keep in mind that this paper is FOR Protectionism and AGAINST Free Trade. So without further ado.

Protectionism is the way our economy should be run. It is the way we have done things for years. It is based on the morals this nation was founded on. I thought America was supposed to be an independent nation. Did we start a Revolution years ago just to come back and start becoming dependant on the nations we sought refuge from? We must stick to the way of our fore fathers.

If we are Americans, shouldn’t we be buying and consuming the goods we produce. Wasn’t it George Washington that said no good can come from making allies. Being our first and greatest president, don’t you think he’s right?

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